Something from a really good friend

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Something from a really good friend

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This is a poem from a really good friend of mine. He sent this to me a few days ago when his father died. I just wanted to show you guys and get a nice comment on the poem. I wanted to show you guys this because there is something in this poem i really admire. Just let me know what you think.

To those i'm sorry
to those in the past,
i want to apologize. when we
were together,it was a blast.
but now we're not and my heart has died.
i believe it may have dropped about three sizes on down.

to those i loved, you know i do.
no matter what,i'll be with you through and through.
but since we seperated,no longer together,
i feel like maybe the tether we had just may not weather,
this storm we must sail through in a dingy little boat.
i think if we try, we'll look back and say "this was a joke"

i want to say i love you to those close to me,
and that's every one be it friends stranger or family.
to those i just met,you're already close.
it doesnt take much to grab my heart and get real close
if you really try you can do a lot more, no matter what you decide
if you have fun nothing will ever be a chore.

i know i may have sounded sad when i started this poem,
it started out as just that. just me and what i felt, face to face about to battle,
like a ball about to be hit by a bat. that sounded weird i'm sure
but hopefully through these poems i find peace,love,maybe a cure.
a cure to my loneliness, a cure to my pain,
maybe i'm being crazy like those who walk in the rain.


what am i saying? to everything there's a cure.
if you look hard enough, you'll find it i'm sure.
i'll leave you now with this piece of advice.
if you find someone who loves you,keep them,
and hold them tight.

"To Those I'm Sorry" by Alex Person
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.Deep & I liked it.
...HOOAH to Alex...
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Post by ADF-Stecom »

ok first thing i thought was a suicide note but yeah it was good got the same thing from a m8 not to long ago but yeah it didnt end so well yeah its great

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